Tuesday, October 21, 2008

LOTF pt 13

Chapter 13

Future


"Waiter, waiter I need some tea."

"I am sorry Mr.-"

"Merridew, Jack Merridew!"

" Wait the same Jack that was caught on an island 15 years ago."

"Yeah, how did you know that."

" It's me Ralph" I'm your waiter."

" Oh darn, well I need some tea, and a new waiter."



Ralph thought that when he pushed Jack off the ship he had died. Apparently When Ralph saw the strong waves and heavy rains he thought Jack would never live. Ralph walks through the doors and when he turns around he sees Jack with a spear.



"911,911 someone call the bloody cops that man wants to kill me."

"What nonsense, I just want to eat my lobster of a spear. Of course I want to kill you, you nasty little boy. Says Jack.

Then Jack starts running at Ralph, saying very vulgar words.

Ralph starts to run saying.

"First Simon, then piggy now me, who's next."

Jack drops the spear and starts punching and kicking Ralph as hard as he can.

"You pushed me off the bloody boat, then started laughing and telling the captain never to come back. Luckily, he did come back only after 5 days worth of swimming, and only eating fish and drinking salt water." Jack yells this.

Ralph answers with, "the only thing I have cared about since we got off the island is getting a job so that I can support my family since we lost everything we had in that war. And now I have half a mind to kill you."





Jack takes a swing at Ralph and whiffs then takes another and Ralph grabs his arm.

"Oh, did I forget to tell you once we left the captain gave us all free subscriptions to: be a marital arts master in 5 short months." Jack Jack's arm is completely red because Ralph has been squeezing it for about 5 minutes.

"If you don't let go in 5 seconds I will call the cops and have you arrested for assault."

"Ok you do that, and I will-!"

Jack socks Ralph right in the jaw, Ralph is on the ground with a broken jaw and bleeding all over.

"Iell hgt rou"

"What are you saying?"

" Ri sraid I will get you."

20 years later.

Jack and Ralph haven't seen each other since the last incident.

Mr. Merridew would you like an upgrade on your suite."

"Yes, please one with a view please."

"Ok and your waiter with your room service will be right up.

Then Ralph also being a worker at the hotel jumps out of no where and stabs Jack directly in the heart with a butter knife. Blood is oozing out of his body at a high speed, like a cop chasing a crimanal.

"Ow. look what you did to me, now i am going to die."

"you mean like you killed Simon and Piggy, and then like before i pushed you off the boat you killed Robert and Roger. You are a criminal, now you will pay your price."

"Dude, not cool i will kill-"

Jack dies as he speaks, blood is still spurting out for some reason. Once Ralph kills him he goes, home to his wife to tell her what happened and tell her he loves her but has to go. He gets in his car drives to the freeway and gets out and instantaneously gets hit by a bus. his body goes flying. If you look closely enough you could see hiss body go up, and he is safely with his old buddies Simon, and Ralph, but Jack went down to hell.

Monday, October 6, 2008

Lord of the flies 12

Chapter 12: Cry of the Hunters
Perspective: Piggy

Death
Two more days, Two more days it is all it would have taken. I would have been Saved. I would have gone home and seen my auntie. Jack just had to kill me, he had to have his fire and pig. They dropped a bloody boulder on me for crying out loud! I wanted to go home!

After i died i see Jack and samneric and blood i dont reall know what that means. They were cordons of Ralph, and Jack couldn't let that be. Then they put the forest on fire to try to kill ralph gosh jack is just mean he cant just kill one or two people it has to be three.

Later Ralph ran out I didnt understan why he was i couldnt see anything on the beach. then I saw a man with drill and epaulettes on his uniform that is a good sign. He ululated knowing he was going to see family again.

Me personally would like to have been alive for this but with one glass it would of been hard

Sunday, October 5, 2008

Lord of the flies 11

Chapter 11: Castle Rock

Perspective: Simon

Who is it next?

Jack is to wild with power if only I could stop him. Ralph is doing a good job of chief I don’t even know why Jack is like this I don’t even know why they killed me I was trying to tell them bout the lord of the flies but they didn’t want to hear. Well now that doesn’t have specs in a few days he will be delirious if he last that long. Jack is so dangerous he was the real reason for my death, he also is power hungry all he thinks about is killing pigs. They need a talisman to protect themselves from Jack.

Ralph should have done some thing to prevent Piggy from going to get his specs. I saw that something bad was gonna happen, but once I reached heaven everyone said you cant inter fear with the alive ones or bad stuff will happen. Ralph should have made a cessation on the way so they could rest. When they got there they saw a giant rock wall. Jack and his hunters came back from the forest. Ralph and Jack started arguing. When Ralph didn’t listen, Jack ordered that Samneric were to be tied.

I don’t want anyone else to get hurt it’s just hard watching this. Ralph should take charge here, take the gang back to the other side before someone else gets hurt. But he doesn’t so Jack and Ralph get into a fight with the spears. Jack stabbed Ralph. I that Roger is gonna do something with this lever I don’t know what it does but it doesn’t seem good. I look again and this lever is like a catapult, and if nothing happens Piggy is a gonner. Then Roger does the unthinkable he truculently pushes down on the lever, I go down and push Piggy out the way but, since I am not supposed to be able to mess with real live people I just go right thru piggy and, the boulder slams down on piggy and he falls forty feet until he crashes down below into rocks. When he came to a stop his head was cracked open, some blood spilled out of his head and he turned bright red. Then I turn around and I see him he is now just a floating spirit like me!

Lord of the flies 10

Chapter10 The shell and the Glasses
Perspective: Jack

The new Rain of Power
I am the chief! Finally no more Mr. Ralph! No more Mr i will blow the conch and you will come. He's so waxy. Also the part was great. We even killed something people were trying to tell me it was the beast but i dont think it was you no what i think it was i think it was Simon. Now everyone was so sad over the fact we killed him. I kept illuminating to myself in my head that it was an accident and we didn’t know it was Simon. The boys don’t know how upset I am, s thats good right. They would think I went barmy.
I was bored and decided we needed fire, so I asked who wanted to come and Maurice and Roger proffered themselves. Then we purged to The old side of the island. Then i thought to my self. How is this fire going to happen. So,we went back to and stole the specs right off Piggys eyes.
Then we went over to the fire and tried to start it once again. From a distance it might have looked like we were doing some theological since we were in a circle, But you cant ever now what the others are thinking while watching this.

Wednesday, October 1, 2008

Lord of the flies pt 9

Chapter: #9 A View to a Death
Perspective: Ralph

The attack against the beastie

Its just Piggy and me around these days. I think everyone else went to have a feast at Jack’s part of the island. I think they just want meat. Once me and Piggy arrive there everyone went silent. The first person to talk was jack, of course and he made the boys to give us some meat. Thank god i haven had meat in a while. I saw the boys treated him like royalty also he was sitting like he was on a throne. Jack and I start to yell (like old times sake) and I tell him will blow the conch but, he says conch doesn't work over hear i and i tell him it does and he says nu uh and i say yeah huh but no one listened to us they all ignored us and ate. Then it started raining, it wasn’t little rain it was lightning and thundering! then Jack said to everyone to do a dance and form a circle around roger who was acting as a pig again. He did look a bit corpulent. Then, some boys came running out yelling that the beastie is in forest. The circle transformed into a half circle shape, and as soon as the beast came out every started attacking it and trying to kill it. Then a parachute fell down holding a dead body. Everyone went screaming into the forest. Later I walked out of the forest and could see phosphorescence on the sand. That's when saw there was no beastie we had just killed Simon. Maybe the beast is inside all of us, and that was why he was killed tonight. No one would listen to him.